Nikon DSLR Advert

So for our very first Media Studies assignment my temporary team and I were tasked with the objective to create a short (30 seconds or less) advertisement for any product. We chose a Nikon Camera. Now this is my 1st time making an ad so please feel free to leave your thoughts in the comments. Any and all critiques are appreciated. I intend to improve and your views will help me more accurately target the areas which need refinement.